Descriptive Writing Assignment

The Woods: Read through the piece of writing below. Try to add adjectives and verbs to make the description more interesting for the reader.

John walked through the woods.  He saw a little deer lying beside a log.  It didn’t run when John got closer.  John looked down at the deer.   He realized that its leg was broken.  It was bent at an angle.  John felt bad.  He went home and called his neighbour who is a veterinarian.  He asked his neighbour to come and get the deer to help him.  John was worried about the deer.